My writing sample

Today we are going to a place called New Zealand and it is a really beautiful place .We are going there to go on a vacation and well we are there we are going on a HOT AIR Balloon yaya.Mele said yay she asked her mum we are we going today so get ready.We all got ready and  drove off to the airport and got on the plane we got there and I fought like they was in my ammy.We got a mote tell well we were there.They were staying there for a month the next day and it was air balloon day.When I woke up with a happy smile on my face I was so so humped because i was going on a hot air balloon today. We went to the hot air  balloon place and there was so much air balloons that we could go on but i went on a yellow/black and blue one. Ti was a very beautiful one and it went high up to the sky and when i looked down it was a very beautiful view.11